Good theme and lovely ending... I like!!! Art goes well with the theme too... Overall good start for a short, bro! Keep it up!
:D im proud of you! i like! how IS the art done... i love the raw almost tactile feel of it! oil pastels in painter?! what what what ees eet?!
starting of a never ending melody!!
wow dude!tht was awesome! art style - superb! first thought the theme was rather cliche but totally liked the ending :) keep going!
hey roshan excellent..
Bwhahe!! loved the ending bro
Great going Rosh..Could have started by commenting on the drawings but honestly dont feel like concentrating on that.. the flow of the story is captivating and the end makes u wanna know more abt it.. So.. there u r.. a winner.. :) good work :)
thats awesome ,there cannot be any comments for sure,nice drawings,nice story ..well done
too good man !!! love it... and the underwear gag had me cracking !!!! now i really wanna see a full blown comic from ur end rosh. !
Thanks a lot guys. @ chintan- oh yeah,it's on the way..(ahem,since jan2009)..but will be out with a bang :D @aman- thanks. glad you liked the art and the story as well. @sups- he he ..i know! tried faking the pastel feel, and sure u won't like it too much . but guess what, some day u'll see a complete traditional piece from me :D glad you liked the story..that was the most challenging thing for me in this attempt. @sumy- ha ha that's was the whole idea :) @merryn- gotcha!! :D it's a custom brush i made in photoshop with a lot of dots and scattering turned on.. the whole thing is done by the same brush :D
rosha, good one..liked the theme and the way its presented, and most importantly the ending..keep going.. :)su
hey rosh Loved it bro. Love the rough look and the direction was amazing.I was stunned by the way you have composed the shots, especially the ring panel and the panel when he looks at the other women at the end. very subtle but very interesting. Love the way you have painted the rain. Well as far as the lettering goes, its more like you narrating it. I know this comic is inspired by your own journey but it shouldn be obvious hehe. U know what i mean. Overall Hats off. Your making me hate you day by day :). Cheers man. great work
hi, i went thru all 6 pages..the story though a common one which many of ur age experience and will go on... but the twist at the end turns it all well !! and ur visuals are far better and creates a mood.. a mood which fits with the story...that i liked more.. and the maturity of ur drawing too ..and the frames and close ups...except the closeup of the young man's face...Bravo...!! i feel good and am confident that you've reached a level of creating visuals which is close to the mood of the story.. that's important....best thoughts for ur efforts.....try another one..!! johns
Loved it!!!i liked the details like curtains et al.. Great one Rosh...
good work. I had trouble in interpreting the sketches of first page. but later on it was good. liked the ring falling scene, also the scene wen she left him. Good theme. keep doing such works.
very nice! love the ending...and yeh, i felt the same in the beginning with ur first page. kinda hard to understand, but from the second page it got me into the mood.
Wonderful story, only made richer by the panels, and the amount of work which has been put forth to bring that detailed facial reactions on each characters.Loved it, and especially the ending... Is this going to be a theme you are going to adopt for your graphic novel in plans, Rosh...Or you have bigger plans for that ?? :)ÇómícólógÝ
holy fuckin shit!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! well dont have topost comments cos I dont think words will do justice.. yu saw my reaction first hand :)
really interesting, those couple of pages give me lots of thoguhts..keeping my fingers crossed to see the full-version..go ahead my bro!!
well done man, loved it. Way to go guys!
awesome.. loved the detailing... and rain.....